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Bird Legs


 
  Bird Legs
Bird Legs
Canon EOS 7d - Tamron 18-270mm lens, 1/80, f/9, ISO 100

Beth Spencer

 
  Crane 2
Crane 2
Canon EOS 7D, Tamron 18-270mm lens, f/8, 1/125, ISO 100

Beth Spencer

 
 
 

Beth Spencer
 

This is a different one for me. I took it this fall when we were in Texas. I am also posting one that is similar. The ones I tried to get of him flying that day were all out of focus, so maybe I will find one in focus before I get through them all.


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November 19, 2012

 

Jeff E Jensen
  Very nice, Beth! The lighting in the 2nd image is better than the first, the first is a bit flat. I do like the reflection in #1, so perhaps a levels adjustment? Also, I think you could crop both images, it feels a tad off to have so much room behind him. I'd do an 8x10 vertical crop, using the full height, putting the bird on the left ROT. Make sense?


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November 19, 2012

 

Aimee C. Eisaman
  The first one does seem flat and maybe a tad soft so I'd focus on the second image. I think Jeffs crop idea will work well and the reflection in the second image will show more once you do that. Too bad that frothy wave wasn't right behind the dark beak in the second one. Would have set it off better as it blends in a bit here. I don't mind cloning so I would use a mask and clone some of that white wave around the beak. :~) Look forward to seeing the changes.


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November 20, 2012

 
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  Not bad for a 270mm. I have to work hard to get these birds even with my 400mm. The white feathers also make this a tough shot. If you shot these hand held you may have your shutter speed to low which is why the shots look a bit soft. There is a rule of thumb which says your stutter speed needs to be at least the reciprocal of the focal length. In other words a focal length of 270mm needs to have a shutter speed of at least 1/270 of a second. Up your ISO in order to achieve that if you want the same f stop. Here I would probably open up to max aperture rather than up the ISO. I think the rest of the suggestions sound good.


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November 20, 2012

 

Beth Spencer
 
 
  Bird Legs
Bird Legs
Canon EOS 7D, Tamron 18-270mm lens, f/8, 1/125, ISO 100

Beth Spencer

 
  Crane 2 edit one
Crane 2 edit one
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Beth Spencer

 

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Standing On The Sand
Standing On The Sand
Canon EOS 7d, Tamron 18-270mm lens, f/6.3, i/500 ans ISO 200

Beth Spencer

 
  In Flight
In Flight
Canon EOS 7d, Tamron 18-270mm lens, 1/640, f/6.3, ISO 200

Beth Spencer

 
 
Ok, I did the edits as suggested and the first one was a bit flat so I tweaked that. The crops helped.
I also found a couple more and think they are a bit sharper. Mike I will try and remember that with the lens. It was the first time I was that close to one of these and I guess I was just really excited. Do you know Are these Snowy Egrets or some other kind?


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November 20, 2012

 
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